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I liked it

IT wasn't too bad. I had a little trouble with it since I am playing on a laptop but still very fun. Nice job.

Seriously dude

OK I love the game and I have legitimately collected all but one of the badges (secret button) but they do not show on my board. THe game is totally worth the five but please fix that one problem.

Very enjoyable

I really enjoyed the game and I too felt that there were some unpredictable parts to the game. The voices began to get annoying though but I was able to get past it. The End was actually pretty easy for me even though I am a guy.

*Free dating tip for guys" When in the dumps with your woman do three things to fix the problem.
1. Always, ALWAYS say you were wrong. I don't care how right you think you are, you aren't.
2. Do or say what ever she wants even if you don't want to. It saves a lot of time and stress.
3 MAKE IT SOUND BELIEVABLE.

This game teaches you that. Listen to it and you will beat this game very easily.

All in all great game.

Truelya classic

You good sir totally deserve the five and so much more. I applaud you for such an amusing game. I played this all the way through in one sitting and completely enjoyed the ending. If you get paid for this type of work then start demanding a raise. Hail Mastermind!

I am only being honest

I can see that you put some work into this and I can respect that. I know you are onto something here but before you make a final product, and please don't take offense to this:

1. Check your Spelling. I counted over 30 different misspelled words throughout the dialog.
2. Refine you Grammar. Really I am just trying to help here, you speech is WAY too casual for an RPG. I expected somewhere to find you saying kk ttyl l8r LOLz.

Please understand I am not blasting you, this only comes from someone who reviews the animations and currently has a very strict english teacher. You use a lot of passive voice in you writing (am, is, are, was, were) they are fine when speaking but not when writing. Write out a script before you work on any more dialog.

3. Add some AI and movement to the enemies, it became very easy to walk in and swipe a few times with my sword and then dodge away. I know this is only a demo but again I am only trying to help you get a better score.

Aside from the mentioned above I actually began to enjoy the game. I do not think it is ready to be posted yet but please work on it. Your game has some major potential.

MitchellHache responds:

Well for the grammer i know it all aint right i was just typin it up so i could see how my game would work. I will fix it all in the end product . The monsters were ment to be eazy at first also . But thankz for the review tho they all help me out in the end!

Controls

I didn't like how the controls handled, tighten them up to give the player better control and I would give it a higher score. all in all fun game and challenging.

HA pretty funny

Yeah you got me kind sir. fun game though

Again and again

For some reason I keep getting drawn to this game. I love it.

Nic work

only thing I would like if you repost this is to take a few of the levels that have multiple choices and allow you to play them at the end

OK I like it

Ok it wasn't too bad once I figured out what to do and the point. Good music kinda addictive. All in all not bad at all

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