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Interesting game

So what is considered a good score? I got 4016 pts on my first try.

WalkingTreeGames responds:

A good score could be considered around 7500, a score over 9000 is really good, and you get to see a secret too :D

I am only being honest

I can see that you put some work into this and I can respect that. I know you are onto something here but before you make a final product, and please don't take offense to this:

1. Check your Spelling. I counted over 30 different misspelled words throughout the dialog.
2. Refine you Grammar. Really I am just trying to help here, you speech is WAY too casual for an RPG. I expected somewhere to find you saying kk ttyl l8r LOLz.

Please understand I am not blasting you, this only comes from someone who reviews the animations and currently has a very strict english teacher. You use a lot of passive voice in you writing (am, is, are, was, were) they are fine when speaking but not when writing. Write out a script before you work on any more dialog.

3. Add some AI and movement to the enemies, it became very easy to walk in and swipe a few times with my sword and then dodge away. I know this is only a demo but again I am only trying to help you get a better score.

Aside from the mentioned above I actually began to enjoy the game. I do not think it is ready to be posted yet but please work on it. Your game has some major potential.

MitchellHache responds:

Well for the grammer i know it all aint right i was just typin it up so i could see how my game would work. I will fix it all in the end product . The monsters were ment to be eazy at first also . But thankz for the review tho they all help me out in the end!

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